laupäev, mai 04, 2024

Unenäokirjelduste tõlkimine

Minu soov tänaste unenägude kohta: "Palun tõlkida need tekstid inglise keelde: /.../"

Minu tõlge abivahendeid kasutamata: "In our schoolhouse were repairing-works. As the repairing-men demanded, playing piano was forbidden in the schoolhouse, because doing that would have made more possible, that the schoolhouse would be soon in ruins. But some pupils studyed in our school exactly because here they could take music lessons. I asked, wether one may sing. We went into the class-room and I sat down with my desk-mate. He said something about the porn-magazines. I answered, that the porn-magazines are not interesting. The desk-mate did not agree. I wanted to visit the WC, before the lesson would begin. But not in the one of the ground flour, because if I would have gone there, the class-mates would have seen that. I recognized, that on the first flour there is the WC of girls. The last chance was to go into the WC on the second flour, but that was so far, that if I would have gone there, I would have been too late in the lesson.

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I tried to think, what was the first job which I had done as a child. At the beginning I thought about one version, but then I began to hesitate, wether that is a job. As the second version I remembered throwing water in a sauna. The grown-ups had thrown it with middle-sized steal thing, but I had been so little, that had thrown that with a small-sized steal cup. Then I had grown bigger and had begun to want very hot sauna swet-room, I had thrown water for that with a maximum-sized thing. Now I was older and threw instead of maximal-sized thing with a middle-sized steal-thing. Now I was in a sauna too. Into the sauna came a man and two children. I had been with those children in the sauna earlier too. But then I recognized, that so much time had passed, that maybe they could not be the same children, but the children of the earlier children. I could not remember, whether here had been today also a woman or whether I had only heard her voice through the door."

Tehisintellekt keeldus tõlkimast, kuna küsimus olevat liiga pikk ja nõudvat seetõttu vist kasutajanime. Ei aidanud ka ühe unenäo korraga sisestamine. Proovisin teist tehisintellekti, mis ütles, et on ülekoormatud. Kolmas tõlkis tekstid nii: "The school building was being renovated. At the demand of the repairmen, playing the piano in the school building was prohibited, as it was said to increase the risk of collapse. Some students attended our school specifically for music education. I asked if singing was allowed. We went to the classroom and I sat next to my benchmate. They said something about porn magazines. I responded that porn magazines are not interesting. My benchmate disagreed. I wanted to use the restroom before the lesson started. But not on the first floor, as my classmates would have seen me going there. I remembered that there was a girls' restroom on the second floor. I had to go to the restroom on the third floor, but it was so far that I would have been late for class if I had gone.

I tried to remember what was the first job I did as a child. At first, I thought of one option, but I started to doubt if it was a job. The second option that came to mind was throwing water on the sauna rocks. The adults had used a metal bucket, but I was so small that I had used a small metal cup. Then, as I grew bigger and wanted to throw a strong steam, I used a bucket. Now that I was older, I was throwing with a metal bucket of intermediate size. I was also in the sauna at that moment. A man and two children came in. I had been in the sauna with those children before. Then I realized that so much time had passed that they should not be the same children anymore, but rather their children. I couldn't remember if a woman had also been present today or if I had only heard her voice through the door."

Minu kommentaar: "Minu tõlge on ilma kahtlusteta vigane ja ka tehisintellekti tõlkes näen, et ta on tõlkinud sõna 'tema' sõnaga 'they'. Sõnaraamatust korruste numbrite tõlkeid kontrollides selgub, et tehisintellekt on kasutanud ameerika, mitte briti inglise keelt."

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